Yes that's the 'dark side' of Tsuzuki as I've picture it.You used the line and the title smoothly and cleverly.Liked the fact that you made Tsuzuki's true self being aware of his environment,aware of what he's doing and where he's going- and not just a pile of angst.The tone of his words are bitter and fit to what he feels and says.Great stuff.
I will not be a slave to the light, heaven, and Emma. Nor will I be a slave to the demons, monsters, and hell.
Love that.Fits to what the Demon said about Tsuzuki being forsaken by God,and what Enma saying that Tsuzuki tries to escape from him.And I think Tsuzuki does show that he does what he does not under one's command (even if he's supposed to),but what he sees right for him to do.
Makes me wish M.Yoko will make a side story of Tsuzuki after the one of Tatsumi...
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Date: 2004-07-18 09:51 am (UTC)I will not be a slave to the light, heaven, and Emma. Nor will I be a slave to the demons, monsters, and hell.
Love that.Fits to what the Demon said about Tsuzuki being forsaken by God,and what Enma saying that Tsuzuki tries to escape from him.And I think Tsuzuki does show that he does what he does not under one's command (even if he's supposed to),but what he sees right for him to do.
Makes me wish M.Yoko will make a side story of Tsuzuki after the one of Tatsumi...