I'm not too sure, perhaps you don't think very highly of it because you wrote it, but I for one am satisfied. I enjoyed the refreshing treatment of the sentence. By making use of something as trivial as a drawing, you've brought out the single line that I had hoped you to. And it's clear--even without the underlining. I'm impressed. Theme fics, from what I've seen, tend to be the worse written, but you've handled this drabble to my satisfaction. Thank you!
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Date: 2004-07-01 04:37 pm (UTC)