First of all, thanks for clearing up your intentions. Now that I've gotten that out of the way, I'm able to look at it from another angle, and just sit tight and let her take me through.
I've also read the Gravitation fic, and have come to the conclusion that I'm not much of a fan of second person POV, because I'm too egoistical to forget myself and see how others imagine I might think. I keep going "But I didn't ask that!". I guess I'm just too narrow-minded for my own good, no? -_-;;
One thing that I wanted to clear up, though. By descriptions, I didn't quite mean the "person trips over chair" kind. Actually, I was thinking of the "Watch out for that vase over there--that one, the one with an orchid motif" kind of description. Nothing too in your face, but something that can give me an idea of the things around me.
Then again, upon rereading, I realise that "we" didn't enter most of the offices, so it's probably impossible to add more description. -_-;; Sorry about that, I should have looked more carefully first.
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I've also read the Gravitation fic, and have come to the conclusion that I'm not much of a fan of second person POV, because I'm too egoistical to forget myself and see how others imagine I might think. I keep going "But I didn't ask that!". I guess I'm just too narrow-minded for my own good, no? -_-;;
One thing that I wanted to clear up, though. By descriptions, I didn't quite mean the "person trips over chair" kind. Actually, I was thinking of the "Watch out for that vase over there--that one, the one with an orchid motif" kind of description. Nothing too in your face, but something that can give me an idea of the things around me.
Then again, upon rereading, I realise that "we" didn't enter most of the offices, so it's probably impossible to add more description. -_-;; Sorry about that, I should have looked more carefully first.