ext_220142 ([identity profile] sasuko.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] starzafandomblog 2004-07-19 12:03 am (UTC)

Allow me to say I just love this piece. Honestly and absolutely. It's probably my favourite piece of yours, right after Illusions, and I suspect it's cause of the writing style. It so smooth that even without grasping the central idea, I can only go "Wow!". The use of the "Ne, can you keep a secret" really gets to me. It's used frequently, but it doesn't sound obtrusive. I can't explain why, though I wish I can.

The second reading gave me a better understanding. I sense a kind of desperation to be understood in there, kind of like a need to justify. It gives that sense of uncertainty and hesitation that reminds me of Tsuzuki somehow.

Like illusions, this piece manipulated my emotions and my thoughts. And I really like it because of that.

Thank you so much for sharing.

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